I finished ...
By don
@dondon23 (117)
Tiberias, Israel
January 30, 2019 11:22pm CST
I finished writing the story
And I wrote her title "Over and over again" 
I hope you like it 
Can you read it? And give me criticism and let me know what you think
If something wants improvement in the story?
(I brought it down in stages in my page there is Post 1-4 )
Thank you
Glad I come
Great page
The story is divided into several parts, because it is long -
1.
2. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247697/continue-to-the-previous-section-2-a-title-for-a-story
3. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247698/continue-to-the-previous-section-3-a-title-for-a-story
4. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247862/4-end-of-love-story-over-and-over-again
I hope you like it
Can you read it? And give me criticism and let me know what you think
If something wants improvement in the story?
(I brought it down in stages in my page there is Post 1-4 )
Thank you
Glad I come
Great page
The story is divided into several parts, because it is long -
1.
2. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247697/continue-to-the-previous-section-2-a-title-for-a-story
3. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247698/continue-to-the-previous-section-3-a-title-for-a-story
4. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247862/4-end-of-love-story-over-and-over-again
A love story between a special officer military unit of special forces, And the woman who works as a volunteer in all kinds of volunteering for the community....
4 people like this
4 responses
@dondon23 (117)
• Tiberias, Israel
31 Jan 19
@cintol The story is divided into several parts, because it is long -
1.
2. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247697/continue-to-the-previous-section-2-a-title-for-a-story
3. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247698/continue-to-the-previous-section-3-a-title-for-a-story
4. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247862/4-end-of-love-story-over-and-over-again
A love story between a special officer military unit of special forces, And the woman who works as a volunteer in all kinds of volunteering for the community....
1 person likes this
@dondon23 (117)
• Tiberias, Israel
21 Feb 19
Hello First, the story I wrote was not published, the truth I started to write it in a different language but not for the sake of publishing for myself but I wanted to know if it is good so I posted it in Anglet on this site, and to hear compliments or criticism, then this story reflects the story of my life But with a little bit , my question? Did you like it!
, my question? Did you like it!1 person likes this
@acelawrites (19273)
• Philippines
31 Jan 19
I haven't seen it. Is there a link?
1 person likes this
@dondon23 (117)
• Tiberias, Israel
31 Jan 19
The story is divided into several parts, because it is long -
1.
2. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247697/continue-to-the-previous-section-2-a-title-for-a-story
3. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247698/continue-to-the-previous-section-3-a-title-for-a-story
4. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247862/4-end-of-love-story-over-and-over-again
A love story between a special officer military unit of special forces, And the woman who works as a volunteer in all kinds of volunteering for the community....
@resukill22 (25052)
• Las Pinas City, Philippines
31 Jan 19
Where is the story you talking about? How we give comment on you
1 person likes this
@dondon23 (117)
• Tiberias, Israel
31 Jan 19
The story is divided into several parts, because it is long -
1.
2. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247697/continue-to-the-previous-section-2-a-title-for-a-story
3. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247698/continue-to-the-previous-section-3-a-title-for-a-story
4. http://www.mylot.com/post/3247862/4-end-of-love-story-over-and-over-again
A love story between a special officer military unit of special forces, And the woman who works as a volunteer in all kinds of volunteering for the community....
