It Was Not Written
@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
February 8, 2019 4:28am CST
The sky invades by fireflies
The moon seems ruled by the clown
A warm view can amaze the eyes
But can never change what's brown
The zephyr drives of the air
The sweet sonata of the wild
Lukewarm feelings nature shared
But never liquefied the icy cold inside
For what can nurse the wound
Albeit reflection mirrored outside
Not even the lovely stars and moon
Can make this heart feel so alive
Once there was a love so true
That's being admired by the happy crowd
Now like him the crowd so blue
Because that love is not written in the cloud...
8/10/2016
Mysterious Aries / Simplfred
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
8 Feb 19
Thank you... No, because the poem maybe sweet at the first stanza. It has a sad ending.
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
8 Feb 19
@simplfred Yes, but I liked the feel of the poem
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
9 Feb 19
@simplfred I see your message I will join this site with is one or two days.
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
8 Feb 19
Thank you, my friend. Have you seen my message at FC?
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I think you need to find a publisher.
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
8 Feb 19
Indeed. Forever seems like a golden sweet myth.
I am not at that level yet... Reader's appreciation is already my treasure. Already a gift to my poet's heart. Thanks.
