AT 3:00 AM

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
February 16, 2019 1:29am CST
Still awake at 3 am Listening to a mellow song Waiting for the sun to rise Holding back the tears in my eyes Still, up at 3 am Doing some flashback What happened to us A love that I've put my trust Still sleepless at 3 am "It's not you, it's me" your voice still echoing My heart was ripped into a thousand pieces And seems was drop into different places Still not in bed at 3 am Holding a bottle of beer Wishing it can help me heal Hoping it can erase what I feel Still wide awake at 3 am Maybe it just doesn't fit right at all Waiting for the sun to rise for me to traces To start anew and pick up... my broken heart pieces... written: Oct. 7, 2014 Mysterious Aries / Simplfred Image: Internet
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@yoalldudes (35028)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
Behind your funny ways, your heart is aching. There are many times you made me laugh with your funny comments.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
That's why my pen name is Mysterious Aries... Make sense... Ha ha... Anyway, Is it a very emotive poem? Well, my emotion sometimes is like a waterfall...My pen usually cries something that my eyes can't.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
@yoalldudes Ha ha... My nature I guess... Sometimes, I can't hold my self even within the comment or reply... Anaphora and metaphor just type by my hand...
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@yoalldudes (35028)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
@simplfred Ha ha you made another poem with your reply.
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@fluffy69 (4955)
16 Feb 19
Are you sad my friend?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
No, my friend. I am just sharing my old stuff... Is it sad? Ha ha.
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@fluffy69 (4955)
16 Feb 19
@simplfred sounds like. Hahaha.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
@fluffy69 Most of my stuff are emotionally sad.
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
16 Feb 19
Heartbreak hotel!!! Powerful stuff!!!
@Merliva (3540)
• San Marino
16 Feb 19
Wow sounds like this touch my heart..i felt that one
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
I'm glad you've felt the effect, my friend.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
@Merliva I agree with that...
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@Merliva (3540)
• San Marino
17 Feb 19
@simplfred oh well good writers reach hearts
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
17 Feb 19
You are gifted and you express the emotions so well
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
A gift and a cursed a the same time, I think...
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
17 Feb 19
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