Thank You, Sir Tate Morgan

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
March 5, 2019 5:04am CST
Hoping not worst, this is my first To try this kind of poem. One master nursed, my very thirst And heaven I owe him. Extended arm, so soft and warm Thawed what is cold inside. He means no harm, only to farm Knowledge from further side. Hoping I'll learn, that's my concern The proper ways of it. Now in return, I think I'll burn Old ways that do not fit. I know it's not, an easy shot To aim a good start. Sir thanks a lot, for what I've got From the base of my Heart... Note: My first poem with a proper rhythm and meter (hopefully). Mr. Tate Morgan is a very kind poet(writerscate.org) who lectured me about it. It is really nice to meet someone who is willing to help and share their knowledge. They really deserve to be acknowledge. 6-15-2017 Mysterious_aries / Simplyfred Image: One of his published book from Amazon
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
5 Mar 19
Thar was a lovely way to show your respect
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
5 Mar 19
Yeah, I think so too...
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
5 Mar 19
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
5 Mar 19
It's good to get rid of old ways and find some new ways!!! Very good lyrical rhythm!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
5 Mar 19
Not easy though... Ha ha... Thanks, my friend.
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