31 Day Writing Tips - Day 8

@just4him (323168)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
May 8, 2019 2:51pm CST
When you complete the first draft of your work, novel, fiction or non-fiction, short story, magazine article, or poem, it's time for revision. You might wonder how you could revise poetry, believe me, you can. You might not see much poetry from me, but I write it, only when the Spirit moves. Those poems, as simple as they are can go through a lot of revision to get them right. The one I have in my book, Thread of Evidence went through a lot of revision until I was happy with it. What made that one hard is the fact it's a limerick, something I don't write very often, but did for the book. However, most of my revision is done in my novels, and I'm certain if you're a writer with books published or waiting on back burners for the right moment to publish, you've revised them. Revision isn't editing, and yet it is. I did two major revisions of my novels. The first was Scarred. I finished writing it in six months, then heard a story on the radio for the same time period of my novel, and completely revised the background for Scarred. I didn't revise the story, only the characters background. That took another six months. The other book I did a complete revision on was Thread of Evidence. When I originally finished it and read it, I realized how boring the book was and needed to instill life in it. When I finished it the second time, it is what I've been working on in the last year to get published. So, what is revision? Revision takes your story and makes it better than it was. It looks at the three parts of the novel, beginning, middle, and end. It looks at the whole work finding holes that need filling. It's the time when you put flesh, sinew, muscle, and bones on your novel and bring it to life. It's when your characters start talking to you and telling you their personal story. It's when you develop the personalities of your characters. It's when you get to know your characters so well, you know how they will act in any situation. You never stop revising until that final moment when your publisher makes it a book for someone besides you to read. If you've ever written anything, even a blog post, have you made changes to it before you hit the submit button? Did you go back and remember something you almost forgot to mention? That's a revision. Thanks for reading. Image courtesy of Pixabay
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@Courtlynn (67089)
• United States
8 May 19
I've totally done that with most of my posts. Especially the childhood memory ones.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 May 19
I can understand that. When I've done those posts about me, I'm always reading it over and adding more to it.
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@Courtlynn (67089)
• United States
8 May 19
@just4him i'd like to read more posts about you, and all that. hope you write more about that at some point,
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
@Courtlynn I'll think about it.
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@whiteream (8567)
• United States
8 May 19
I have gone back and revised blog posts that I had posted years in the past. There is always something new you can add.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 May 19
Yes, there is.
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@valmnz (17095)
• New Zealand
10 May 19
Good advice! Revision is so necessary. It's so important for longer work to sit a while and have time to sort itself out.
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@valmnz (17095)
• New Zealand
10 May 19
@just4him that is quite a while
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
10 May 19
Yes, it is. Scarred sat for longer than a little while when I first started working with it. I took the time to raise my children while it sat waiting.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 May 19
@valmnz 8 years. It was worth it.
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• United States
9 May 19
i used to do revisions'n the blog, but aint touched that'n way o'er a year now 's i've jest lost the desire 'n some'f my southernness. used to do lots 'f revisions when pennin' novels 'n articles fer magazines. don't reckon the brain could keep such a pace these days? i've been workin' such'n the latest fer nearly 2yrs.
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• United States
9 May 19
@just4him very true :) though'n the case 'f this novel such'd be so. seems i got my seasons a lil wonky (bloomin' times)?
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
@crazyhorseladycx We do what we must. It keeps the peace.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
It's not always necessary.
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@DianneN (254926)
• United States
9 May 19
Usually it's a typo for me on here, but I certainly have had to revise many papers and reports during my career.
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@DianneN (254926)
• United States
11 May 19
@just4him I still make typos on myLot.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 May 19
@DianneN I think that's going to be one of my topics for the writing tips series. Typos. Oh wait, does that mean I will get another bill for another great idea you gave me?
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
I'm sure you did. I hate typos and now I need to be aware of the non-typos - homophones.
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@thelme55 (79324)
• Germany
9 May 19
Yes, I revised most of my blogs. I have made many changes when I thought I should have written them like this or that.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
It's amazing what we go through to make our posts look good.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
@thelme55 I think we could all do better. I always edit/proof my posts.
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@thelme55 (79324)
• Germany
9 May 19
@just4him so true. If I think I could do better, I edit my posts.
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@jstory07 (148734)
• Roseburg, Oregon
9 May 19
I rewrite all of my silly stories that I write on here. Thanks for the tips.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
You're welcome.
@JESSY3236 (22245)
• United States
10 May 19
Yes. I had to revise some articles on Textbroker. I had to revise one yesterday because I used the keyword too many times. And when I got rid of some of those words it made my word count to go down. I was supposed to have 300 words. I had to add something to get the 300 words. That's why I sometimes don't like revision.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
10 May 19
I'm sure it can be a problem.
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@HazySue (39265)
• Gouverneur, New York
28 May 19
I am one of those people that can revise till the "cows come home". Sometimes I end up pretty close to the original.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
28 May 19
Yeah, me too. It's the plight of authors and writers.
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@Julie555 (4156)
• Russian Federation
9 May 19
Revision is the greatest thing in writing. Absolutely agree.
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 May 19
Thank you. It gets the story where it needs to be.
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@Kasjnak (4489)
• Romania
8 May 19
I never thought about this. I often go back and read again what I wrote, making small adjustments until I feel it's ok. Often, but not always . Sometimes I rewrite the entire post or comment. Nice, I like the way you explained this, thank you very much!
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 May 19
You're welcome.
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• Sonora, California
8 May 19
I have done many rounds of revision in my writing career, and continue to do so!
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@just4him (323168)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 May 19
I'm sure you have.