No More

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
May 17, 2019 2:47am CST
No more, He can hear no more The most wonderful song, about your love for him The much-awaited three words from your tongue Are now just for the rocks... No more, He can see no more The gleaming diamond shapes that jump from your eyes Yes, the white sensitive leafy alike that fall from it Are now just for the critical eyes of those who still can see No more He can feel no more Your touch to his icy hand Your fire of effort cannot ablaze the candle Because the candle was already melted by the sun... Only your arrogant manners that count to him Only your harsh words that score Because now, he is cold That's why no more You are a lifetime late... March 28, 2017 Mysterious Aries / Simplyfred
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@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
17 May 19
A melancholic poem of love.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
Thanks, my friend.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
@Nakitakona Then, my friend. I am just posting my old stuff here. Nowadays seems I've lost my passion for it or maybe I am very busy with a lot of things that I can't manage to write a new one.
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@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
17 May 19
@simplfred You're welcome. Do you always write poem?
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
17 May 19
This is a terrible realization when she loves a certain man!!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
Yeah, most realize the value of someone when it is too late.
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• Pamplona, Spain
17 May 19
That is one lovely poem thanks for sharing it.
@anil02 (24688)
• India
17 May 19
Thanks for sharing this poem.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
Thanks for the read, my friend.
@hereandthere (45628)
• Philippines
17 May 19
it feels like a poem for a departed father
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
Right on point, my friend.
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@rakski (156506)
• Philippines
17 May 19
the poem is sad. I can feel the agony here.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
17 May 19
Sometimes people consider the value of someone when they are not around anymore...