Broken Ring

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@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
May 21, 2019 8:40pm CST
Twinge though sans words Mirrored through her face Indeed, she has a broken ring White truth reveals itself Euphonic blissful pledges Resembling day but an evening Now, her derelict heart reciting dirge Reflecting dark tune Her eyes can only sing... October 18, 2017 Mysterious Aries / Simplyfred
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
22 May 19
You are so poetic.
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
23 May 19
@simplfred And you are still.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
23 May 19
@JustBhem I don't my friend. Seems the poet in me disappear...
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
22 May 19
I used to be, my friend.
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@CarolDM (203454)
• Nashville, Tennessee
24 May 19
Nicely done, I should start posting some of mine.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 May 19
Thanks. Yeah, looking forward to reading yours, too.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 May 19
@CarolDM Well, poetry is of a different kind. Sometimes, I just portray or put myself on another shoe.
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@CarolDM (203454)
• Nashville, Tennessee
24 May 19
@simplfred Mine are usually just thoughts I have.
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@RasmaSandra (73167)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
22 May 19
Really awesome poetry. Loved this.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
22 May 19
Thank you, my friend.
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@db20747 (43425)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
22 May 19
Did her husband leave her for another woman!! This ybreaks the heart into a million pieces!!
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
22 May 19
That could be the case... Thank you, my friend.
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@Hannihar (129349)
• Israel
12 Jun 19
@simplfred Thank you for sharing that with us.
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@Hannihar (129349)
• Israel
12 Jun 19
@simplfred You are welcome.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
12 Jun 19
Thank you for reading...
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
22 May 19
Tears are the usual solace of every woman who is hurt, frustrated.
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
22 May 19
@simplfred Yes but for women shedding a tear is their reliever of woes, worries and heartache.
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