(My Schizophrenia) Words of Encouragement

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
June 3, 2019 4:53am CST
"Stay safe, Stay strong" my old friend giving me some words "Have Faith" they've said, "Give your trust unto the Lord" "It's easy for you to say" I've said "You've seen and heard nothing that will rock your head" "You are right, They are wrong" voices of my friend from outer space Supporting my conviction asking me to shout for them to leave our place "I'm still here waiting my love" said a lady whose name was Jane Indeed I remembered her, my heart keeps calling her name... "Love her? She was nothing compared to us!" those beautiful nymphs again Showing their naked body seems so real that let me forget something... "No one could ever help you' No one could ever heal" my mother voice to feel "It's only you, my son, can cure yourself, can give your wound a heal" "We've won again, we've won!" all of them again cheering While looking at the shadows of my old friend, my love and my mom leaving... "Sir here's my handkerchief" a voice from a nurse unfrozen myself freezing To then, I've realized that my eyes turned into a dark cloud And Now, It's really raining... written: August 27, 2014 @ 8:35 PH standard time Mysterious Aries
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
3 Jun 19
This condition will drive u crazy! A person wonders what is causing all these terrible visions!! This may sound extreme but imagine these visions on fire!! Imagine them gone up in flames!! Create your own visions with power over them!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Jun 19
Nice idea... Easy said than done though my friend...
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
4 Jun 19
@simplfred yes, but keep trying, the visions u create will win!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Jun 19
@db20747 I think I will just leave it right there...
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@YuleimaVzla (1857)
• Maracaibo, Venezuela
2 Aug 19
That deep words, you have a good gift of contributing drama to poems, it is a more intense type of version than romantic and it is not easy to make it much less interpret it. congratulations on it.
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• Maracaibo, Venezuela
3 Aug 19
@simplfred Whatever the reasons that may have led you to no longer write, do not prohibit the world from continuing to know your talent, friend.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
3 Aug 19
Thanks... This is quite a story series but I have stopped posting here the full story for some reason.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
3 Aug 19
@YuleimaVzla Thanks for the advice, my friend...
@Sreekala (34312)
• India
3 Jun 19
So you wrote so many poems in the past. Glad to read those now.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Jun 19
Yeah, beside of this series, I have a bunch of them... Thank you, my friend...
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