May I ?

@Starkinds (32737)
India
August 8, 2019 2:13am CST
I know your life is not for me, But you are sure for me, I'm not in your dreams, But your open eyes only for me, If your choice would be great, Then create a reason to forget, May I say something to you? You and only you are, My life's blessings.
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anil02
@anil02 (24688)
• India
8 Aug 19
It is beautiful.
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anil02
@anil02 (24688)
• India
9 Aug 19
@Starkinds welcome
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
9 Aug 19
@anil02 hello good evening how is your day
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
Thank you
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BirDan
@birjudanak (14316)
• India
8 Aug 19
nice poem and now I can understand each and every word of that poem and hope everything will be alright. you are in a super romantic mood because of rain in the past few days.
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BirDan
@birjudanak (14316)
• India
8 Aug 19
@Starkinds aw so sorry for it then just cheers the rain and enjoy day
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
Thanks my dear ,rain doesn't effect much my mood becauseb im a poet as well.
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
@birjudanak no it's ok thank you
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Yanzalong
@yanzalong (19091)
• Indonesia
8 Aug 19
Short but meaningful poem.
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
Thank you
julito
@antonbunot (11146)
• Calgary, Alberta
8 Aug 19
I don't know if this rhyme does not melt the one intended to!
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****DANIELLE****
@VivaLaDani13 (60812)
• Perth, Australia
24 Aug 19
@Starkinds Oh yay! A poem! This was a beautiful poem Jaya!
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****DANIELLE****
@VivaLaDani13 (60812)
• Perth, Australia
24 Aug 19
@Starkinds oh I am so sorry! I didn't mean to bring up memories for you.
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
24 Aug 19
@VivaLaDani13 no please don't say sorry being a poet I can express my feelings through my poem so don't worry
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
24 Aug 19
thanks my dear I wrote this poem for my ex
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Christina Ladanger
@Ladanger (14572)
• United States
8 Aug 19
This sounds romantic. Is it meant to be romantic?
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
Yes my dear it's my little poem
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Christina Ladanger
@Ladanger (14572)
• United States
8 Aug 19
@Starkinds what a sweet poem
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Jaya singh
@Starkinds (32737)
• India
8 Aug 19
@Ladanger thanks, do you really like it?
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Avinash
@avi256 (8515)
• Pune, India
13 Aug 19
May be I don't relate much with poems, but it was nice reading this one. May be the person for whom it is written can feel it.