Love, Look What You've Done

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By Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

Philippines

September 16, 2019 3:46am CST

Ever longing for ethereal touch Crafting some soulless kisses Arising the dead times Oh! My once ravishing rose We've sketched xanadu Not knowing you've scattered Seeds of sinister intention And now, Albeit into melancholy I still care for you Cherishing our luminous days Rather than disgusts The terrible twilight Half alive, half dreaming Fully insane... October 6, 2017

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@yanzalong (19091)

• Indonesia

17 Sep 19

Nice poem my friend.

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

17 Sep 19

A bunch of thanks, my friend.

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@yanzalong (19091)

• Indonesia

17 Sep 19

@simplfred Welcome.

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@Starkinds (32737)

• India

16 Sep 19

It's a heart touching poem with pain

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

16 Sep 19

Love hurts sometimes, Thanks, my friend.

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@Starkinds (32737)

• India

16 Sep 19

@simplfred yes very true

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@birjudanak (14316)

• India

16 Sep 19

sometimes people in deep love that its hard to forget somethings easily. there is a pain i can feel in this your poem my friend.

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

16 Sep 19

I agree, my friend. Thanks...

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@ZedSmart (19839)

• Philippines

16 Sep 19

I think it is best to the both to move forward, have their own life, to live happily rather than boxing oneself to that kind of misery...

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Frederick Espiritu

@simplfred (20641)

• Philippines

16 Sep 19

I agree, my friend... Will take much longer time to others to move on, sometimes.

@ZedSmart (19839)

• Philippines

16 Sep 19

@simplfred That is true. It's not that easy.

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