I'm So In Love
@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
October 10, 2019 4:33pm CST
Oh my, I think I'm so in love
I always think of her, this beautiful dove
Her dress, shoe, and bag, printing in my head every day
Her face, the way she frowns and smiles, keeps me so okay
I don't notice any flaws, every move she does was great
The way she talked, just any from her, even the way she hates
I often hold her face in my mind
To my looping imagination, doing crazy things all the time
Is she thinking about me too
Oh heaven please give me any clue
I can feel my heartbeat ten times faster
In every single chance, we're together
Next time we meet, I will eat all my pride
Its only her to tell, if this feeling will survive
My Lord, I'm really so in love
Please hear my prayer! Sky Above.
written: November 22, 2014
Mysterious Aries
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18 responses
@LeaPea2417 (40020)
• Toccoa, Georgia
11 Oct 19
That is a beautiful poem, is it about someone in your life?
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@LeaPea2417 (40020)
• Toccoa, Georgia
11 Oct 19
@simplfred I understand that, it is very nicely written.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
Thanks... Actually, I am already married when I've written this piece.
I just turn back time to the feelings that I have then during my college days...
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
@LeaPea2417 Thank you for the appreciation...
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@stringer321 (5682)
• Kiryat Ata, Israel
10 Oct 19
Do you feel the love in this poem ?
This man thinks his love is perfect, and is everything he needs.
I think this kind of love is beautiful if it is mutual. If not then it can be an ugly tragic story.
I think men have to first be confident, know what they are worth, love themselves, and then they can love others, and make a relationship.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
10 Oct 19
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, my friend.
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@stringer321 (5682)
• Kiryat Ata, Israel
10 Oct 19
@simplfred what do you think about it ?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
10 Oct 19
@stringer321 When I write this poem, I've portrayed my feelings when I was in college and so in love... So, I am not very confident then and don't know my worth but the woman becomes my girlfriend then just we don't have a better ending in the end...
I think your vision about being confident, knowing and loving self before making a relationship is ideal but sometimes those kinds of situation or attitude will be found when we are already in the relationship simply sometimes we become a better person because the one we love inspired us to be one...
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
You will surely feel this immense feeling as time goes by... So, is that the man from your other discussion? Did you both contacted each other?
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@db20747 (43419)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
11 Oct 19
@simplfred yes, I'm hoping to see him sunday!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
@db20747 So it pursues... I'm happy for you... Goodluck...
@yoalldudes (35030)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
I see you've kept your poems from college. The poem was spot on, you were in love 
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
No, my friend... Actually, I have a wife when I've wrote this piece... I just portray my teenager feelings when I write this... Haha...
@yoalldudes (35030)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
@simplfred Oh I see. Some reminiscing. That is good too. Love is a feeling.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
Where have you been, my friend? Thank you for your appreciation...
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@Aansh13 (11433)
• New Delhi, India
13 Oct 19
@simplfred
Just got caught up with life... now I am back at my happy place...
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@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
That's 5 years ago. Now have you married her?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
Yeah, Actually, I am married when I've written this piece... I've brought back my feelings as a teenager when I've written this... It is hard to portray past feelings but I just hope I've portrayed it right...
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@1hopefulman (45111)
• Canada
12 Oct 19
You have a way with words and can express your feelings well! Is this about the woman you married or someone else?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
14 Oct 19
Someone else, my friend... The feelings were for my ex...
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@birjudanak (14316)
• India
11 Oct 19
Its so romantic poem and the most important thing is her opinion but sure she loves you too my friend.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
12 Oct 19
I'm glad that you see it that way, my friend...
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@a_jerobon (2317)
• Eldoret, Kenya
11 Oct 19
That is an awesome poem. Sweet words.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Oct 19
It is okay, my friend... I agree, my friend but if I used the word "Infatuated" or "Like" the effect on the piece is not that exciting... Ha ha...
@Michellekidwell (29953)
• Sonora, California
10 Oct 19
This is a beautiful poem!
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