Seeing Him Surrender.. In All Truth He Did Not....
By Sue21
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
Pamplona, Spain
July 5, 2020 5:12am CST
In the cool soft calmness of the night
Orange silvery moon high in the sky
She felt so much unease
She wanted his tears to dry
She softly whispered there is a part
A part of you that cannot give in
It will never surrender
Its part of who you are
Part of who you are meant to be
Listen to your heart and know
I honour your feelings
Right as they are now
I honour your feelings
I see you surrender a part of you
Take heart all the rest of you is steadfast and true.
All my own words and this is how I felt watching "The Last Samurai" he seemed to give in but really he did not.
Have a beautiful rest of your day from Sue.xxx
Hans Zimmer created a beautiful soundtrack for The Last Samurai in 2003. Enjoy this beautiful compilation with relaxing ambient sounds and visuals. I hope th...
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@Butterfingers (66585)
• India
5 Jul 20
Very nice poem and especially the choice of words is perfect
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
5 Jul 20
Thank you Raj its really the way I feel about things that go on around in the World also but it is also about seeing whatshisname surrender his sword he did surrender but really he did not bit difficult to explain.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
5 Jul 20
@Butterfingers
What I mean is the rebel part of him the natural defensive part of him did not give in sorry so much explaining.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
7 Jul 20
Its also part of a real story but its very private too of what happened to someone sometime back now. Thanks again.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Jul 20
Thank you Val have a great day ahead and I really love the soft calm music and all the people who took part in that great Film.
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@just4him (306110)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 Jul 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 I'm glad you did.
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@LowRiderX (22907)
• Serbia
9 Jul 20
Did you write this poem? It's lovely, a bit sad, but lovely..
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Jul 20
Yes I wrote it and its the feeling of a lot of things that have to do with somone else thank you.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
13 Jul 20
@LowRiderX
Have a great evening ahead thanks.
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@LowRiderX (22907)
• Serbia
12 Jul 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 I se I understand! You are welcome
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
5 Jul 20
You're a poet. How often do you write poem?
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
5 Jul 20
I don´t feel like one I feel just like someone who writes what they see and feel at various times.
About every two or three days mainly for myself really as this would be full of them just kidding. Thank you anyway.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
6 Jul 20
@Nakitakona
Put it this way I just write what I feel in the moment its a sort of poem as I am not brillant at long stories really for the ideas yes but not to write books.
Thank you anyway.
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@Nakitakona (56302)
• Philippines
6 Jul 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 I don't say that you're an accomplished poet but you're a poet for you write poem. 
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
5 Jul 20
Yes its a movie but that is part of the soundtrack and I wrote something around it but also to do with other things.
@BelleStarr (61047)
• United States
15 Jul 20
YOu have a way with worlds. Very touching.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
16 Jul 20
Thank you very much glad you like it just how I felt in that moment and its a beautiful story and film.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
9 Jul 20
In truth I am defending someone who cannot defend himself and also defending a couple of other things all written in there.
Thank you Jan glad you like it.
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@Lavanya15 (12888)
• Chennai, India
5 Jul 20
Excellent poem, I loved a lot. Thanks for sharing hear.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
5 Jul 20
Thank you I was honouring the defense of someone and others things that are going on right now.
I tried not to complicate it
