My addiction is You

July 19, 2020 5:49am CST
I'm addicted to you, I'm addicted to remembering you And addicted to take care of all emotions of you, I'm addicted to love you, I'm addicted to have you in me, I'm addicted to you only. - rOsHnI mAhAsWeTa I have tried to write this little poem long ago while sitting beside a window of a movie train. I saw a couple and suddenly this poem came to mind. I wrote it instantly. Please let me know how is this poem? How can I improve this? I know I'm not good writer. But I try to be a good one. Stay safe, stay healthy. Take care and have a hopeful quarantine day.
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Xavier Bage
@franxav (13653)
• India
19 Jul 20
A romantic poem surely. Continue writing poems I won't say I am addicted but I love reading poetry.
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Thank you very much. I appreciate your support
Lavanya
@Lavanya15 (12888)
• Chennai, India
19 Jul 20
Excellent words my friend. I really loved it. Thanks for sharing hear.
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Thank you very much
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Lavanya
@Lavanya15 (12888)
• Chennai, India
19 Jul 20
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sourav
@sparial02 (858)
• India
19 Jul 20
Nice. Keep working on it. You are going to find what you are searching.
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Really!!! Thanks a zillion. I really appreciate your support
The Fly One
@aureliah (24321)
• Kenya
19 Jul 20
It is such a beautiful poem
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Thank you very much friend
Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Thank you very much
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Fat Oreo
@fluffy69 (4956)
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19 Jul 20
Sounds good full of loved and happines,this quarantine we must think positive in all aspects
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Yeup. We should think positively.
Ria
@EveningPrimsrose (24)
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19 Jul 20
That's beautiful. Keep it up @RoshniMahasweta
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Thanks buddy. I'll keep it up surely
Twinkle
@Teekaaa (11580)
• India
19 Jul 20
Whoa! You've penned it very well. It's really very nice.
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
And the pleasure is all mine
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Raj
@Butterfingers (66585)
• India
19 Jul 20
That's very good dear. You can certainly do better too
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Mahasweta Bhadra
@RoshniMahasweta (309)
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19 Jul 20
Yes, I hope so
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