an evening of reminiscing someone from my memories

@chamae (33)
October 15, 2020 10:11am CST
wrote this poem(by thinking of someone) Missing you by this hour Just reminscing some of our memories while we talk we got no worries as we fully understood one another as if we are together In a place like u can call Home together with my kids and your pet but i know like u said gurtie stay outside just u saw her nearby not inside your house But it is fine bubba is there and i know you'll definitely give care Like u did to me and my kids And wishing all goes back to normal and youll be here to stay by you near. JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THIS TIME IS OURS coz i always think and missing you by this hour.
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@Nakitakona (36323)
• Philippines
18 Oct
Good poem but in writing it's improper to use text words like u instead of you. It will defeat the essence of the thought of the poem. Hope you understand what I mean. No personal insult I made.
@chamae (33)
18 Oct
yeah i understand what you mean but its understood by the someone i am referring into my poem but thank you and i know its improper to use text "u" instead of you... I don't feel insulted in any ways coz it's ok to be corrected..it only shows my imperfection..isn't it
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@Nakitakona (36323)
• Philippines
18 Oct
@chamae I know it's addressed to the person whom you endear so much but you have posted it publicly for us to interact. If it's kept privately you can write anything you want.
@Adie04 (10998)
15 Oct
Nice poem.