A Poem I Have Made out of Love

By Neil
@Neil43 (4521)
October 18, 2021 11:17pm CST
Karrey You were first seen wearing red Your beauty is reflected in the eyes Although there is a face covering Suddenly fascinated regardless. It's been a long time since I've been looking The night came to sleep soundly Even your shadow can be found in the blink of an eye Why I feel like I'm in the cloud. Together our eyes twinkled Unstoppable as if speaking I just fell in a flash In the first scene I end up groping Tomorrow you are the only view Even though everything focused on me were lights I have no other desire but not to give up The only one that stands out among the graduates is you Seeing another with you felt a pain I kept pursuing the desire of selflessness Destiny is playable in cycles Reunited again in an outburst. The possibility was unthinkable That we can fly As if in heaven When we first tasted the reality.
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@Shavkat (141905)
• Philippines
19 Oct 21
I can feel all the love through your words in this poem.
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@Neil43 (4521)
19 Oct 21
Really? Thanks. As you can see that is how powerful love can do. Actually I wrote it originally in my mother tongue following a certain meter but since it is translated in English the meter and rhymes are are broken already.
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@Shavkat (141905)
• Philippines
20 Oct 21
@Neil43 Not bad to be translated. I am not good at making poems. It is not my cup of tea.
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@Neil43 (4521)
21 Oct 21
@Shavkat It takes practice, patience and heart to make poems.
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@arunima25 (93194)
• Bangalore, India
19 Oct 21
You poured your heart out. God bless your heart
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