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@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
June 14, 2022 7:51pm CST
Eyes is making some liquified salt again Like before Pain just creeps every now and then He doesn't want this anymore Losing his faith to hope Sees black color on the rainbow To the clouds his eyes tries to cope Turns it to a vow and throws some melting arrows Should break this kind of fate But his confidence left him What if he jumps from this bad ship But he doesn't know how to swim So must wear this funny mask Continue to pretend When this bad ship reach the shore or get sunk Just the same, he will be sorrow free in the end...
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@RubyHawk (99425)
• Atlanta, Georgia
15 Jun 22
Excellent poetry. Do you publish your poetry?
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
15 Jun 22
I am happy that you can appreciate such writing... I just share them online...
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@RubyHawk (99425)
• Atlanta, Georgia
16 Jun 22
@simplfred You should send your poetry to poetry magazines.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
16 Jun 22
@RubyHawk Sadly, most of the poetry mag won't accept poetry that are already posted online...
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@JimBo452020 (42629)
• United Kingdom
15 Jun 22
Sometimes it is difficult to think of a title
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
15 Jun 22
I agree ....
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