The September Fantasia
By Shizuka
@choijungeun (2520)
Hangzhou, China
September 4, 2022 5:15pm CST
Writing words on the lake,
my soul has wandered around the memory.
Those secrets you hid carefully,
could you say it to me loudly?
Olive autumn is a nostalgic sorrow,
trying to catch up your kiss but i can't.
Please don't call me Keats on my tomb,
i don't deserve your spoony waiting.
Chrysanthemums are you last gift,
no matter how time changes,
my heart always sings with the wind,
let the unspoken love breezes lavender.
Faded connection between you and me,
i lightly kindled the candle of the first sight.
Blue as your eyes,snowy as your skin,
i don't ask much but wish you'd be my everything.
Now September,by the river,i play the violin,
you've gotten a better man to give you heaven.
Please forget the eternity we promised under the stars,
from this moment,i'll leave your world.
After all,a ghost's love,only can show to the fireworks in the rain.
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@choijungeun (2520)
• Hangzhou, China
5 Sep 22
I've been tired of writing poetry,because i have no way to let Chinese people see all of my works.As for Publishing,that's important.But there's nothing i can do but writing poetry.I just wish God can truly give me a miracle.Thanks for your reading,that's very cheerful to me
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@RubyHawk (99425)
• Atlanta, Georgia
5 Sep 22
@choijungeun I love poetry. I write poetry and have had poems included in Poetry magazines. I’d love to publish a book but publishing is costly and poetry doesn’t sell well. I hope you can make your poetry public.
@choijungeun (2520)
• Hangzhou, China
5 Sep 22
@RubyHawk You're right,poetry is cold in the market,so i try to write some short stories and translate Chinese ancient poems into English,that might be a good choice.
Thanks for your encouragement,i'll keep up,wish one day i can publish my poem.In the end,i wish your books can be the hotcake
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@RebeccasFarm (86754)
• United States
5 Sep 22
A ghost's love..this is haunting for real your poem.
Your talent is immense.
I feel so lucky to see it.
@RebeccasFarm (86754)
• United States
6 Sep 22
@choijungeun I wish I could do more for such a talent in this lonely world
@choijungeun (2520)
• Hangzhou, China
5 Sep 22
i always try to create a perfect art world that my heart envisioned,a dream kingdom that only i live in there,ghost love is a good material that can let my dream horse fly.Thanks for reading my poem,i really appreciate you support me all the time.
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@choijungeun (2520)
• Hangzhou, China
6 Sep 22
@RebeccasFarm You've done too mcuh,i really thank you for your everlasting support
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@choijungeun (2520)
• Hangzhou, China
5 Sep 22
Glad to hear that,i guess writing poetry is my only solace,no one i can trust or pour my heart out in my homeland,poetry is the only thing that easing off my pain.I just wish the dreamy world it showed can let people know who i am.Thanks for dropping by.Have a nice day
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