Haiku style poem
By Stacey
@xstitcher (39045)
Petaluma, California
September 13, 2022 8:23pm CST
My brain is fried today because I was confused about paperwork that I was doing.
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Thinking all day
Wondering what I should do.
Now my brain is fried.
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I say "haiku style" because it has the 5-7-5 syllable count. If anyone wants to gripe at me, yes, I know the poems not about nature. I just felt like writing it.
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@Deepizzaguy (122232)
• Lake Charles, Louisiana
14 Sep 22
I enjoy your writing on this post.
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@BarBaraPrz (51834)
• St. Catharines, Ontario
14 Sep 22
Oh, are haikus only supposed to be about nature? I did not know that.
@xstitcher (39045)
• Petaluma, California
14 Sep 22
That's what someone griped at me about once when I wrote something that I said was a "Haiku", and they said something to the effect that "This is not a Haiku. Haikus are about nature." Guess they were some sort of "expert".
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@Nakitakona (59987)
• Philippines
26 Sep 22
This is a Japanese style of poem writing. Your first line has only 4 syllables. Is it okay?
