One of the many poems I wrote while away

@jnrdutton (3452)
United States
October 26, 2023 7:04pm CST
She said "Don't lend me your heart, Love. I want it for keeps, I want you to know you mean so much to me " He said "I'll Love you and hold you, until my last breath slips away, you've got me forever, that's the promise I've made, never think for a moment that my Love for you will fade" The life they built together, oh they'd never trade It's simple & it's sweet, and they've got it made By: J.N.R Dutton
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LindaOH
@LindaOHio (222624)
• United States
27 Oct 23
Lovely poem. Very simple and sweet.
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Judy Story
@jstory07 (148749)
• Roseburg, Oregon
27 Oct 23
Simple and sweet love is the best. That is what I have. I want nothing fancy.
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Ruby Hawk
@RubyHawk (99367)
• Atlanta, Georgia
27 Oct 23
That’s a beautiful poem, but you likely know that poetry books and poetry magazine don’t accept poetry that’s appeared online.
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J.N.R Dutton
@jnrdutton (3452)
• United States
27 Oct 23
@RubyHawk yeah,if I ventured a guess why, it's probably a precautionary rule,to avoid any potential plagiarism concerns. I kind of get the logic if that's the case. Thank you though,glad you like my poem.
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Ruby Hawk
@RubyHawk (99367)
• Atlanta, Georgia
28 Oct 23
@jnrdutton That’s why I never share poetry unless it’s already published.
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J.N.R Dutton
@jnrdutton (3452)
• United States
28 Oct 23
@RubyHawk that's a smart way to go about it.
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