Jack and Jill
@allknowing (145274)
India
December 5, 2023 11:00pm CST
Most nursery rhymes have a sad ending and browsing through history they are all based on some happenings in the lives of kings and queens
If you were to rewrite Jack and Jill how would you give it a happy ending?
Mine would be
Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pale of water
Jack proposed to his lovely Jill
A diamond ring he bought her
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@RebeccasFarm (94527)
• Arvada, Colorado
6 Dec 23
Jack and Jill went up the hill to get a new place to live.
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
8 Dec 23
@RebeccasFarm But this nursery rhyme was rhyming (lol)
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@RebeccasFarm (94527)
• Arvada, Colorado
8 Dec 23
@allknowing Right there.
Not all poetry rhymes you know.

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@Shavkat (140443)
• Philippines
7 Dec 23
@allknowing I am sorry, but I am not good at rhymes.

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