Jack and Jill

@allknowing (145274)
India
December 5, 2023 11:00pm CST
Most nursery rhymes have a sad ending and browsing through history they are all based on some happenings in the lives of kings and queens If you were to rewrite Jack and Jill how would you give it a happy ending? Mine would be Jack and Jill went up the hill To fetch a pale of water Jack proposed to his lovely Jill A diamond ring he bought her Image credit:
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:April_Baby_Jack_and_Jill.jpg
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@RebeccasFarm (94527)
• Arvada, Colorado
6 Dec 23
Jack and Jill went up the hill to get a new place to live.
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
6 Dec 23
(lol) Where is the rhyme?
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
8 Dec 23
@RebeccasFarm But this nursery rhyme was rhyming (lol)
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• Arvada, Colorado
8 Dec 23
@allknowing Right there. Not all poetry rhymes you know.
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@Shavkat (140443)
• Philippines
6 Dec 23
I think it is a good version.
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
6 Dec 23
Can you think of any?
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@Shavkat (140443)
• Philippines
7 Dec 23
@allknowing I am sorry, but I am not good at rhymes.
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
7 Dec 23
@AmbiePam (97951)
• United States
6 Dec 23
I really like your version!
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@allknowing (145274)
• India
6 Dec 23
Most rhymes have a tragic end
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@jstory07 (143847)
• Roseburg, Oregon
6 Dec 23
That is a good ending that you wrote.
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@sarik1 (7566)
6 Dec 23
I heard rhymes. good rhymes .