Untitled New Poem

@jnrdutton (3452)
United States
December 19, 2023 5:33pm CST
Lee Loves dancing with Lara beneath those Alabama pines, keeping her close, holding her tight. When he breathes in the mix of her perfume and that sweet Southern air, it's got him feeling fine. He doesn't need the whiskey or the White Port wine, he's been dry six years and Life's so much more than alright, Everything's so much sweeter with the Love of his life By: J.N.R Dutton
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@LindaOHio (222302)
• United States
21 Dec 23
Good job! Always enjoy your poems.
@RasmaSandra (98005)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
19 Dec 23
Nicely penned. Just one suggestion to completely wrap up the poem and emotions. One last line - wrapped together, dancing beneath the Alabama pines.