DO YOU LIKE THIS SHORT POEM? PLEASE RESPOND. THIS IS MY OWN.
@blossomingflower (636)
India
December 2, 2006 7:54am CST
The shadows of sunshine and
The night falls emerging as one symbol
Both faces are dark
One's hiding from the direct light
The other one is painted in dark color by night
Who cares them as long as light in our midst
These shadows and the painter of darkness
Never put the sunshine in oblvion
It triumphs as long us the universe alive
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7 responses
@swarn47 (1706)
• India
2 Dec 06
Yes, it is good.
What about this?
Written with a pen
Sealed with a kiss
If you are my friend,
Please answer this:
Are we friends or are we not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
So tell me now and tell me true,
So I can say, I am here for you.
Of all the friends I've ever met,
You're the ones I won't forget.
And if I die before you do,
I'll go to Heaven
And wait for you.
@blossomingflower (636)
• India
2 Dec 06
It's very nice poem. I read somewhere sometime back. It had refreshed my memory. Thanks. One for you.
The letter you sealed with a kiss
Received with lot of kisses
Each of your words I recieved as bouquet
Thanks a lot long live our love
I won't allow you to leave me alone in this world
We are two souls made for each other
Let's make this world as heaven
Why do you look for other unknown heaven?
I wait you here in this world
For ever For ever
@blossomingflower (636)
• India
4 Dec 06
Thanks. This is for you.
I was shy in my first kiss
I was lavish in my second kiss
I had grown up like a flower
With all the kisses that followed
Then we celebrated our first honeymoon
That day we will never forget
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
8 Dec 06
this is also from my own
I’d give anything to see the sun set on the horizon,
I’d do anything to gaze at a full moon in the night sky;
Even a rainbow would make me smile,
And I’d love to swim in crystal clear waters
Of an untouched sea;
Sometimes I’ll see a shooting star,
And try to gaze from afar,
All the diamonds in the night sky;
The mist on the mountains is breathtaking,
As is walking in rainforest;
To see cascading waterfalls I’d do anything for,
As to stand on the highest peak in the world,
And look at the sights below;
I’d love to soar on wings above the clouds,
Across the bluest skies;
I’d do anything to see
All the beautiful things in the world,
Like a red rose blooming in the Sahara,
Like a river twisting through a dusty land,
All the beautiful things in the world;
But I also know I am looking at
The world’s most beautiful creation,
Every time you smile,
And every time I look into your eyes.
@blossomingflower (636)
• India
3 Dec 06
Thank you for your laurels
What else a writer needs?
A pen and a paper to scribble
And creation comes into being
It will get life only when
Somebody say good things about it
@blossomingflower (636)
• India
5 Dec 06
Your response is sweet
Your symbol is also sweet
To hear a sweet word like
what you said goes long way
To energise my spirit
Thanks a lot
@imranwajid (741)
• Germany
4 Jan 07
Seems to be a good poem. Try to polish your creativity a bit more.
@shali3000 (742)
• Italy
9 Dec 06
It's very nice poem,many compliments :)
You're really a good writer and I like your style.
I like to write poems too but in Italian language and sometimes it's hard for me translate in English :)
