Just launched my music channel "Bleak Waves" - Would love your thoughts on my latest lyrics!

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Hi everyone! I recently created a new YouTube channel named Bleak Waves, where I share my original music and songs. Writing and creating music has always been a passion of mine, and I’m really excited to share my work with a wider audience. I recently dropped a new song on the channel and wanted to share a snippet of the lyrics with you all: You broke my heart But didn't go You left my life Not my soul Here are the full lyrics to the song: (Verse 1) You broke my heart The night you left Door stayed open After your steps Street light stayed On the wall I didn't sleep At all Phone in my hand No one to call (Verse 2) Morning came The coffee turned cold I heard your name In stories told Friends kept asking "Are you alright?" I just smiled And said, "I'm fine" But every night I lost the fight (Chorus) You broke my heart But didn't go You left my life Not my soul I live my days Like I'm fine You left my world Not my mind (Verse 3) Your jacket still Hangs on the chair Late-night drives I feel you there I hear your voice In the empty seat Then comes the silence Cold and deep I keep moving Through the night Looking for a love I couldn't hold tight (Bridge) I stopped calling Months ago Still I talk Like you know I tell the room About my day Then remember You're away (Final Chorus) You broke my heart I won't pretend Some things stop But never end I turned the page Still I find You left my life Not my mind How do these lyrics feel to you?