What do u think?

United States
December 9, 2006 4:53pm CST
Hey can i get some honest feedback aboput my freestlye poetry if you dnt know what that is its making poetry str8 from your mind and on to the paper without thinking about what your going to say its very hard i've been doing it for awhile some i want to get some feedback now so please be harsh i take it tell me what u think please. Life is a journey that we take, some forsake. Some take life for granted but as time goes by your life ends and you die so reality is what it is you live to love make money and have kids. So why is life the way it is you give or you take you can either take the pressure or brake.Make your life one to remeber for those you leave behinde so when you go they will know everything is fine does it blow your mind that we have so little time here look around enjoy the little things you see because looking is the only thing thats free.But its nice to know that you lived and you knew life to bad we can't live it twice. Peace
1 response
• United States
9 Dec 06
thats pretty good