December 15, 2006 2:14am CST
THIS IS A POEM I WROTE MYSELF AND I WOULD LIKE SOME OPINIONS ON IT. I HAVE MORE THAT I WILL EVENTUALLY ASK OPINIONS ON AS WELL. I LOVE POETRY AND IF ANYBODY HAS POEMS THEY HAVE WRITTEN I WOULD LOVE TO READ THEM!!!!THIS ONE IS IN MEMORY OF MY DECEASED NEICE WHO DIED AT BIRTH!! A BABY ANGEL THROUGH LOVE AND TRUST SHE WAS BROUGHT TO YOU, BUT WHY SHE WAS TAKEN ONLY GOD REALLY KNEW. AFTER LOTS OF PRAYERS AND QUESTIONS OF WHY, IT LEFT YOU TO WONDER WHY NO ONE WOULD REPLY. SHE WAS SMALL AND BEAUTIFUL WITH A BRIGHT PRETTY GLEAM, FOR THAT TO HAVE HAPPENED A MISTAKE IT WOULD SEEM. NOW SHE HAS HER WINGS AND WATCHING FROM ABOVE, WHILE WAITING FOR THE DAY YOU'LL REUNITE WITH LOVE. UNTIL THAT DAY WILL COME GOD WILL HOLD HER TIGHT, AND LISTEN TO YOUR PRAYERS EACH AND EVERY NIGHT.
• United States
19 Jan 07
hey girl! i just wanted to say that you tugged at my heart with this poem. i know that this must have been hard for her parents. i have lost 3 due to complications during pregnancy and that was hard. i can't imagine seeing my baby after and her being gone. thank you for sharing this! Lots of Love! witmuch