Complete the given story - how better can you write?

@ktvgames (142)
Pakistan
December 23, 2006 2:39am CST
Fifteen years back a child (of age 5) was misplaced by the parents, they tried to find him for so many years, but they couldnt. some two to three years back the child was seen on the trains platform, from there he saw a man coming out from the train they saw each other and the boy was astonished while seeing him (complete the next phase of the story)
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24 responses
• India
23 Dec 06
They all lived happily for a period of three years. Then one stromy day, the boy who got married then was comming from his work place. In the road to his house he finds a car hit to pole and in the car he finds gentleman who was bleeding. He brings out the gentleman and carries him to his house on his back. He knocks the door, his wife opens and get surprised to see him carrying some one on his back. As the boys mother was a doctor they dint call any form outside. Slowly in two days the man opens his eyes and see a lady in the mirror and takes a name repeatedly, "James" " James". All are surprised, who is James. Then the doctor says "James might be some lady very close to him or his love" and he is missing her. Then everyone cool down. The doctor then give the gentleman sleeping medicine and leaves. In the night the wife of the lost boy(now man) slowly gets off her bed and moves to the room where the gentle man was taking rest.
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• United States
23 Dec 06
The wife talks to the man and tell him that he need to leave because he is taking up to much space in her house. So the next day the man leaves the home in search of his family. The lost boy/man decides that it's his calling to be a preacher. So he decides to start a church in the basement in a local housing projects because he wants to help people who needs help. The lost boy/man goes out to the street and ask runaways to join the church. The lost boy/man starts to get national attention for his service to god and the community. So the lost boy/man is ask to become pastor to a money church in Atlanta, Ga.
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• India
23 Dec 06
the man could not believe that even after so many years how could the child be same..the man had been a close friend to the parents and had seen the child before..he wanted to get closer to the kid but had this weird feeling that this can't be true..but somehow he gathered all his courage and went close to the boy..but little did he know that fate has other surprises waiting for him..(hope someone would carry it forward)
@vipul20044 (5794)
• India
23 Dec 06
He was his old gardener! he at once had a nostalgia about the mud, the disgusting worms, the stinking clothes of the gardener He went to him and kicked him as a token of love!
@nishanity (1650)
• India
23 Dec 06
LOL... now tht was a good one!
@polachicago (18716)
• United States
23 Dec 06
I cannot complete saga, because I do no understand how child can be "misplaced". Do you mean placed to adoption?
@lulylove (1560)
• Brazil
24 Dec 06
yes... i dont understand too. what it wanted to say with this topic? it will be only plus a rejection to earn in the Mylot?
@samson1967 (7414)
• India
23 Dec 06
Tears rolled down from the boys eyes and eagerly he runs towards the man who alighted from the train, who is none other than his own father. The father too recognised his lost son, his heart was fulfilled with gratitude and he embraces his son. Back at home the father trains up the boy in Carpentary which was their ancestral profession. The boy masters the carpentary and grows rich. His parents marry him to a girl who was orphan. and they all live happily together.
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• India
24 Dec 06
the boys eye's was filled with tears and at last both the family stays with the boy
• Sri Lanka
24 Dec 06
The man getting down from the train was weird. He had a red beard and white hair. He wore a striped dress and carred a briefcase in his right hand. His shoes were blue, something the boy has never seen before. Another reason for the boys astonishment was that the man had 11 children behind him, 2 sets of identical quadruplets and one set of identical triplets. The mans wife was dressed like a Singaporean, it was easy to make out from her smile that she works for Singapore Airlines. But what really astonished the boy was that the man, though posh looking did not offer a dime to the boy. So he just let things go as it his. He is a lost boy, so lost he will be.
• India
24 Dec 06
because due to his sharp memory he recognise his father and fahter is also surprise because that boy face is same as him . He (father ) felt that this boy is my son , than he told about their past history regarding misplaced of him and than that boy come back to his home and they live together .
@Khangura (924)
• Canada
23 Dec 06
After the child misplacement father and son had finally reunited.. The father instantly knew it was his son that he was looking at.. The father starts to walk toward his son and the son towards his father.. the father spreads his arms waiting for the son to hug him.. The son walks right past him and goes to some random girl and boards the train.. lesson learned by father : DONT MISPLACE UR CHILD lol
@mkirby624 (1598)
• United States
23 Dec 06
the correct question probably should have been "how well can you write" not how better.
@nishanity (1650)
• India
23 Dec 06
have u seen any old indian movies? they have an almost same theme!!! here is my version of the story! ".... he knew he had seen the man somewhere but he couldnt exactly put his finger on it.... the man came closer... even he had an expression of faint recognition... the boy smiled at the guy,hoping he would atleast reveal who he is... the man dint do anything... he just went and sat next to the boy.. he asked who his parents were and boy started crying... he dint have any... he has been homeless for quite a few years!!... the man asked him, 'can u show me your forearm?'... the boy askd him why, but the man gave no explanations!1... so the boy unrolled his sleeves and showed the man his forearm... and the man gasped!!! there was a distinctly shaped mole of this noys hand that was exactly identical to the one his long-lost son had had!! he got on his knees and hugged the boy!! the boy didnt know wht to say... he tried to break free as he still dint recognise his father... then the man told him 'i'm sorry my son, i am ur father... thanx to mine and ur mother's mistake,we had lost u.. and today due to some starnge luck i have got u back my child!!" the boy was thrilled beyond words.. and he and his father hugged each other oblivious to the stares of people around in that small railway station!! THE END note:if u liked my story, do rate me!!!
@amithzepp (153)
• India
24 Dec 06
this is a good topic
@tulwave (174)
• United States
24 Dec 06
I don't have time to respond with a story, but I want to tell you that this is a terrific idea for a post and I wish you luck on the complete the given story idea. I bet you will get allot of responses and a ton of copy cats. I hate the subject of a misplaced child. I am a parent and would die if this happened to me.
@Leonzz (195)
• Brazil
24 Dec 06
So, losted, he goes to find someone down stairs of the way. Nobodys finded, the boy comes back to drink something when he looks for a pretty girl. He thinked into possibility to talk with her. But when he looks again, she desapeared. Getting out of the bar, the boy looks for a great building, thats likes hunted. On the door, on the door, a caution sayin
@kstanley7 (1171)
23 Dec 06
The thoughts of what had became of the boys life had been playing on his mind for sometime, he kept on thinking to himself why, what had he done to be given a harsh blow in life, he never knew if he had any brothers or sisters, as it had been such a long time since he had been in contact with his parents.
@jimotman (633)
• Indonesia
23 Dec 06
the man took the boy as his son, and the boy admired him so much and take him as daddy. a few years later, the parents found the boy, but the boy doesn't want to leave his 'daddy', so the real parents are very sad, but they agree to see each other as often as possible. later on, the 'daddy' was killed in an accident, so the boy move in with his real parents again.
@leonilyn (467)
• Philippines
23 Dec 06
the face the man was very familiar with him.when their eys met, he can saw the loneliness of the mans eye. he decided to follow where the man will go. and he saw him setting on the bench and the man is crying while looking at the picture. the child decided to sat beside the man. he ask the man why he is crying. and the man said he missed his son so much. while saying those words the man handed the picture to him. to his surprise it was him. he asked for the mans name and it was his dads name. from there they hugged and cried. after that they went home together and spent time together forever.
@cheongyc (5072)
• Malaysia
23 Dec 06
carrying a photos his photo on this hand. He had been keeping the only photo that he had for years. The photo was framed in a pendent attached on his necklace. For 15 years, he had been wondering who is his biological parents. He had been asking the mistress in the orphage but to no avail. Because the mistress found him lost in the street and do not has the slightest idea who the kid belong to. His only hope faded when the mistress passed away 2 years back. He concentrated on his study after that and got a scholarship from a established corporate. He asked the old man, "do you know who is the kid?" poiting at the photo the old man is holding. "my son, if he is still alive, he will be about your age, you look very much like him" "I am your son, papa!" said the young man frantically. He slowly pull out the photo he had been carrying for 15 years. "Son!" the old man broke into tears after seeing the identical photos. They hugged each other and tears running down for 10 minutes in the platform.
@anjuscor (1266)
• India
23 Dec 06
boy met his twin brother who lives with his parents. Then rejoined the family and lived ever after
• India
23 Dec 06
He walked up to the man who had got down from the train and caught his hand. The man looked at the boy but dint show any sign of recognisation. The boy smiled and called him "Papa" and the man was shocked. He looked closer but yet their was no sign of recognisation. Tears were rolling down from the boy's eyes as he caught the man's hand tightly. The man took the boy in his arms and realised that it was his son as he felt his warmth. He was over joyed to have his son back and they both went back home to live happily ever after.