I worte an article,may you touch it up for me?

@andygogo (1579)
China
December 29, 2006 9:01am CST
I don’t think there will be a distinction in the care of human .It is one of the basal rights which help people to keep them alive . Someone will say that celebrities had got enough resources and the world is always no justice to everyone under the sun .W ell ,it seems reasonable but little imperfection. Firstlymedical treatment ,as a kind of public weathy .as long as you are one of the member of the social ,you get it .public’s for everyone ,no matter who you are ! Secondly,celebrity as a a heavy purse,has a good condition to keep them healthy .it is hard for them to get ill from food or work .you know ,tax brings medical treatment .as a rule ,celebrity brings more .
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