Passion Burns!!
By ronita34
@ronita34 (3922)
Canada
January 31, 2007 3:22pm CST
He pulls you in with a loving embrace.
Caresses your body with such passion you shake.
Kisses your neck with the softest of lips.
Pulling you into such peaceful bliss.
Your body trembles at the thought of whats next.
He tells you relax while closing your eyes.
You hear something opening your senses atune.
The perfume of massage oil fills the room.
He massages you attenatively all through th night.
You wake to perfection from the dawns daylight!
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@Sir_bobby88 (8231)
• Singapore
1 Feb 07
Well that what you call passion isn't it ?? but i don't think that my passion too yea ... i would rather sleep yea lol
@ShadyGrove (996)
• United States
1 Feb 07
Are you putting together a portfolio of your work? That would be a great thing to do -- any maybe you could illustrate it, or have someone else do that for you.
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@rajeshb4u (41)
• India
1 Feb 07
ur idea of poetry is good and its really thrilling
one thing needs appreciation is that u didnot use any wrong words which r to be mistaken
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@sweetstacy (160)
• Philippines
1 Feb 07
while reading that short poetry of yours,i have been imagining about my boyfriend.well he gives me a massage whenever we have the time,and i like the way he kisses and caresses me.all throughout the poem all i could think of is him,and how happy we are when we're together.so thank you for your poem.it made me realize how lucky i am to have him.and to have his love. =)
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@payingforschool (678)
• Canada
1 Feb 07
beautiful! I have to say I have had those kind of massanges...my hubby is a keeper :)
@justinmackx (516)
• India
1 Feb 07
that really shows how passion is pouring from your writting. keep up the good work. you are a good writter
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@mytwo_daughters (2663)
• United States
31 Jan 07
Wow! sign me up whoever he is! I wish I could get someone to do that for me. Especially when it is going to be below zero here in Feb. Not a bad winter however!
@ScotsFerret (375)
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31 Jan 07
Wow, thats really good, I wish I could write poetry but I'm usually not very good with words even when it comes to vocalising them. Although i did write a poem for my fiancé right at the start of our relationship when we were miles apart, I'll have to have a look and see if I still have it on the pc, other than that I have a couple of pieces of what I'm told is creative writing rather than poetry.
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