True Meaning of Love!! ( To All The Mylot Mothers!)

@ronita34 (3923)
Canada
February 3, 2007 2:10pm CST
This is a [poem that i wrote more from experience than anything else. Hope you all enjoy this and remember i want honesty!! The pain washes from my body, completely away. As she stares into eyes, with her unknowing gaze. The world and all its wonders, surround her today. As she is pulled from my warmth and her waters waves. As the doctor pulls her from me, with the help of my last push. I lay my head back breathless and listened for her cry. As she feels the worlds cold draft welcome her today. The joy of child birth and how glorious it can be. How we as little woman with hold the intensity. Once it is all over and she is here with me. There is no need to complain or whimper. She has completed me. By: Ronita G
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@MakDomMom (1474)
• United States
3 Feb 07
This poem is awesome! I have 2 children and the relief that you feel after giving birth is jsut so overwhelming! It's magical and perfect. The babies first cry, first breathe, first blink, first everything... WOW!! nothing can beat that experience. Thank you so much for sharing this well written poem.
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
You are very welcome and i also agree that it is overwhelming how you cab go from being in the worst pain of yoru life to be being perfectly fine and practically pain free! I love my daughters and i will always remember and cherish their births!!
@MakDomMom (1474)
• United States
24 Feb 07
Thank you for the best responce. It means a lot. Have a wonderful day!
@lifeiseasy (2292)
• United States
4 Feb 07
Very touching ...as anyone who has birthed achild will feel the same ... How do you find the insperation to write such great poetry ??? I am not any way shape or form a writer ..I just am in awe of others that can make their words come alive and make the reader feeel something through their words ,very well done my freind
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
All that i ever do honestly is come up with the title and it just flows from there. I think that the hardest part for me would be actually the coming up with the title more than the poem itself! I am glad that you like my poetry and i thank you for such wonderful encouragement and support coming your way to me!! God Bless!
@rainbow (6762)
3 Feb 07
That about covers it yes, the world melts for a few weeks, lovely!
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
Thank you and as always i am most grateful that you enjoyed it!!!
• United States
4 Feb 07
That is very beautiful. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing it. Please make sure you copyright it though, or someone may steal it from you.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
I sent you a private message regarding my copy writing and i thank you for your advice!
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
I am glad that you enjoyed and i thank you sincerely for your advice and i will do just that!!!
@davis123 (507)
• United States
21 Feb 07
aww i showed it to my mom and she loved it
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
21 Feb 07
I am glad that your mother liked it as i wrote it knowing the feeling that it brought her!!!
• United States
6 Feb 07
I am really enjoying your poems today, This one by far is my favorite. I have lived that poem five times and it's really how I felt myself. Keep writing!
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
10 Feb 07
It is nice to have someone that enjoys my poems!!! That is awesome and you must be a wonderfully patient woman with 5! I agree that this was written from a memory rather than just a though!!! God Bless!!!
@soorimd (300)
• India
4 Feb 07
only a true mother can express such a great feeling and only the loved child understands the love mothers love and how beautifully you have tried to bring out that warmth and feeling in your poem.though words can never explain the true emotional feelings they bring the closest meanings to our life. kudos to you
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
I am glad that you emjoyed it and understand what i was trying to bring!!
• India
4 Feb 07
true love is undefinable only u can express by ur eyes ,heart and with ur emotion.this feling have capabilty to confront with the world knowingly his power but no one knows where these dared has cone,this is the perception of the most that god helps those who loved truely but history as a proof true love never met to an end
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
11 Feb 07
Nice to know and thank you for your contribution to the poem!!! God Bless!!
@jsae29 (1120)
• Philippines
4 Feb 07
right through my heart! very well written. You ought to be a true mother to be able to write such a beautiful poem.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
10 Feb 07
Awwwww.....Thank you for such a wonderful response and i love my daughters they are my everything!!!
@lafavorito (2960)
• Philippines
4 Feb 07
mother's love - here's a picture of my and my son take on 2005 new years eve
Great poem! As a fellow mother I agree with you that True Love can be seen in a child's eyes. I can distinctly remember the first time I laid eyes on my son, he was so small but he cried so loud, that very moment I felt so proud to be a mother. Everytime he does something that made me angry, I try to remember the first time I saw him in the delivery room and I will feel calm.
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
YOu are absolutely right that once you hear that first cry that is when you know how truly blessed that you really are!!
• Philippines
4 Feb 07
this is such a wonderful poetry... its amazing to realize how a little creature could complete you, changes youur liife and gives you a good reason for life itself
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
YOu are absolutely right that such a little person can fulfil so soo much !!!
@mimatexas (1835)
• United States
4 Feb 07
It's a pretty poem! It's about a mother giving birth to his child. My daughter Janet likes to write poems too!
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
That is awesome and be sure to encourage her with this as it is a great gift to have!
@yanjiaren (9050)
4 Feb 07
do you really want to make me cry today lol? i am already in a state of i don't quite know exactly how to phrase it...beautifully rendered..and even more beautifully given to us..thankyou for your lovely gift..
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
LOL...I am glad that you like it and that you also feel what i was trying to portray with this and i thank you for your wonderful reply!
@ILANEDRI (1921)
• Israel
21 Feb 07
This poem is really amazing! I love him so much! Keep on writing, and post your poems here. I will be glad to read them.
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• United States
4 Feb 07
what a beautiful tribute to your little girl. Motherhood is such a gift, as our children are gifts to us, and you have definitely captured that feeling here.
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@25504884 (25)
• India
4 Feb 07
true meaning of love is affection or want to have with person every time.going to fantasy about that person.we can only feel love around us.u can only identify that to that person how much love u have
@XxAngelxX (2830)
• Canada
4 Feb 07
Ohh that is beautiful :) And so true. It's funny how the pain is completely gone once we have finished delivering them. I guess this is the reason we keep having more, they do complete our life don't they :). I have three of my own and I'd never change it for anything even though originally I had only planned on having two. I cannot imagine my life today without them.
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@manmaxman (850)
• India
4 Feb 07
yes u r wright about that the true meaning of love is only dadicated to mothers only
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@Kayzzaman (173)
• India
4 Feb 07
Love is an intense feeling of attraction between two souls in quest of getting into some emotional attachment to one another. This kind of intense feeling just holds the bond together as long as there is no external stress breaks the bond asunder. When the bond cannot sustain that kind of intense stress it automatically is snapped and the ties breaks into their former selves.Though love is a psychological matter to pursue, it is also physically related to the bond itself. Sometimes it is seen that the the psychological attachment is thr pre-condition or the backbone of physical attachment. Without psychological attachment, physical attachment does not take place. If it happens so, it can be taken that there is something wrong in that physical attachment which is generally accepted as most unwarranted.
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@tleena (72)
• Nepal
4 Feb 07
Hi Ronita, actually i am not mother but your poem i like most.I think you have written your own experience. If you allow me to cotegorize your poem i would like to say confessional poem as like Sylvia Plath.
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