Check if this is a sweet poem for my hubby (my post valentine gift)!!!

pretzels!!! - grab a bite!!! =) love you dady!!!
Philippines
February 16, 2007 2:52am CST
I am standing tall despite the apprehension and fear, for I know someone holds my hand. A hand who's warmth made me brave. The hand of a dauntless man, courageous yet faithful. A man of pride but who knows how to cry. He is a man of strong-will, but he listens when I speak. He is a man of imperfection, but he is humble enough to admit. He may not give me what I want to possess, but he can give me laughter and genuine happiness. He may not be able to show me the world, but we eat together until our tummies grow as big as Earth. He may not have all the wealth, but he is dutiful. His hands are rough yet cozy and strong to keep me close. He may not be fit for a king, but his heart fits with mine. He is a man of God, a respectful son, an afable person... a loving husband. He is truly mine. He made me change... he saved my life. It was difficult. But all he did was to give me love.
2 responses
• Philippines
17 Feb 07
this poem is filled with love. i like it. very nice.
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• Philippines
18 Feb 07
thanks!!!
@mcaf1970 (140)
• Philippines
17 Feb 07
good!!! i didn't know you're poetic. (it's hard to compose a poem huh. the poem must rhyme). good for you. i'm sure your hubby will love your poem.