Just Continue Loving Me...a composition

United States
February 28, 2007 9:10pm CST
I can see the light when you're here beside me I can feel your love with your arms around me I shower the flowers with your sweet kisses I can run in the rain with your eyes watching me Chorus: When the sun sets down, it's still your face I see When the moon is gone, your shine, I want to be When all the love has blown, my love will only live I can wait forever, just continue loving me I can stay forever by holding you closer I can make laughters with eyes full of tears I can believe in dreams when no one there is seen I can shout the one I love, just come and hold my hand (repeat chorus) I've waited for so long for someone to come Now that I have you, i'll never let you go (repeat chorus) ....so what do you think guys?
1 response
Darkwing
@Darkwing (21583)
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1 Mar 07
I love these words, but I don't know where they're from. I guess a song, but I never heard it before. Can you write poetry... I do, but it's a little more complex than the words you have here. Brightest Blessings.
yramecarg
@yramecarg (12)
• United States
4 Mar 07
Thanks Darkwing! This is one of my compositions (a song) when i was in college. I already put some music in it...it's a love song actually...can you give some examples of your poem?
Darkwing
@Darkwing (21583)
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5 Mar 07
If you like to visit my website, which a friend encouraged me to start, you will find quite a few of my poems which you're quite welcome to read through. Please leave your name in the guest book if you visit. www.freewebs.com/darkwing3 Thank you for sharing your song. I like it very much.