hey... i need your help to finish this song... about Peace and Hate
By ronreyes
@ronreyes (4724)
Philippines
April 4, 2007 12:32pm CST
I'm planning to create a 20 minutes song and it's about Peace and Hate. I think it's a great idea if different members of MyLot will contribute some lyrics for this project.
Any lyrics will do, no matter how long or short just as long the idea of Peace and Hate is there.
This is what I wrote so far... it's actually a poem I wrote way back when I was a sophomore high school. This is called "The Inevitable Life"
Here I'am again
struggling to get out
struggling to be free
from this world of doubts
Many things undone
many words unsaid
so much love to give
but all hearts are dead...
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
I saw you today
you are dressed to kill
seems like you don't care
what others may feel
When you walk in skirts
all eyes upon you
couples fight all night
it's because of you...
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
In our government
politicians fight
it's like World War 3
in the NEWS tonight
United we stand
divided we fall
I think those words sucks
because hate stand tall...
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
Why there is a war
between you and you
all day and all night
all I hear is you
I've heard you've been drunk
and fought with your wife
you've punched and kick her
like she has no life...
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
So where's the peace now?
could you please show me?
take me to a place
where we can be free
Help us to get out
from this messed-up place
away from gun's sound
that kills human race...
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
People make love songs
for the world today
but why there is hate
in the world today?
Maybe it's not time to sing this love song!
I'm looking forward for your contributions.
I'll choose the best ones then I'll combine it with mine and so on until it will become a 20 minutes song.
I'll post the finalized lyrics here in MyLot as soon as it is finished.
Thanks in advance!
- Ron Reyes
www.ronreyes.co.nr
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11 responses
@ydiwan (448)
• India
5 Apr 07
WOW you sure are one talented guy and a deep thinker i appreciate the subject your song is based on and i will write a few lines which can be added by you and yes u have to do the editing stuff and where u want to place it ok ? here goes nothing
Love and Hate
Two different pillars of life
one gives hope and friendship
the other gives pain and plight
Humans live life around the second ground of hate
reason enuf herewith given by god
Animals live around the first circle of love
thanking god by not giveing them reason to think right
Love comes from Heart
Hate and selfishness comes from the Mind
so please think with your heart
and Vanquish the Hate my fellow brothers Human Kind
Acck i know i have done a horrible word but hey it was just short notice and everything was in a spur of the moment and it is 100% original so maybe u can work on it and make the corrections.
Later my friend
@Lauraleigh99 (4718)
• United States
4 Apr 07
This is a really awesome idea that you have here my contribution would be something like this
Children around the world are dying
From hunger all over the place
And all some can complain about
Is another persons race
Hope you like it If not go ahead and modify it!
@ronreyes (4724)
• Philippines
4 Apr 07
No! Your lyrics is cool! No need to modify!
By the way, I want to apologize about my mistake in the last part of my lyrics. In the "People make love songs" part...
"People make love songs
for the world TODAY"
The word TODAY must be "TO PLAY".
I mistyped it so I'm really sorry to all who've read it.
Anyways, thanks Lauraleigh99 for your contribution.
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@hockeygal4ever (10021)
• United States
5 Apr 07
Very interesting concept. I hope you find a way to share the end result with us, including it performed to music! Remember YOU TUBE! LOL
I'm not really artistic enough to come up with good verses, especially at the moment...I seem to suffer from mush mellon head too much lately! But please, continue with what you are doing!
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@neenasatine (2841)
• Philippines
2 May 07
i'm reading your lyrics and this is one of my contributions, sorry im not good in making lyrics just want to share my suggestion..i hope it will be a great help
World seems so unfair
yeah, i'm losing hope
why hate stands all?
still finding answers
Maybe it's not time to share this love song!
@neenasatine (2841)
• Philippines
2 May 07
sorry if i'm not that inspired to share the lyrics. i'm starting to move on because i have bad experiences with unfair people in our society. undergoing recovery right now. i really dont understand why people seems so unfair.they only just think of themselves,they never reconsider the feelings of other people like me.
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@lornalhai (148)
• China
5 Apr 07
It is a good idea, but i do not know well about rhythm. Expecting the song, wish you good luck.
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@dnatureofdtrain (5273)
• Janesville, Wisconsin
11 May 07
Maybe it's Race
and a lack of thrill
May it's lack of place
and the urge to kill.
Why don't we join hands,
and and care throughout the land
Try to understand,
and stop being bland.
....
It is time to rise,
It is time to sing.
It is time devise,
and Make the peace bell rings.
....
There is a couple for you.
Take Care,
- Dana C. L.
"DNatureofDTrain"
leader of the Peace Keeping Rails!
@sumofalltears (3988)
• United States
15 May 07
I don't know if this will help or not, but it is a form of self assessment similar to your writings:
we hide things within us
we don't want people to see
but those things we hide
are what makes us what you see
the love and the hate
the accomplishments and the failures
the truth and the lies
are all that makes us wise
in the final assessment
wisdom is reflected
in the sum of all your fears
as well as the sum of all your tears
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@barnkinney (1343)
• Philippines
11 May 07
wow.. i really think you're talented and all those who were able to contribute! my creative juices are not flowing right now and if i post something it might sound too crappy even for my taste, so, i'll hand it over to you guys! great work! keep it up!
- barn kinney
http://barncogitations.blogdrive.com/
http://barncogitations.blogspot.com/
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@Chryssi (828)
• United States
14 May 07
I've sat here for a long time, trying to come up with a few lines for your song. I'm terribly sorry, but this is all that I could come up with, as I seem to have hit a writers block.. lol..
How much better,
Would the world be..
If we rid ourselves of hate,
And loved completely and unconditionally?
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@oceansvimj (81)
• India
7 May 07
Today,
peace is a piece of life
devil has ate the rest with the hate.
why trust and faith last no longer
why disbelief sets in heart so stronger...
why people can't unite
why do they have to fight...
Let's
make this world a better place
a place where there's an addition of peace
and subtraction of hate
a place for people to have a better fate...
