lets write a new story

@Elusive (285)
United States
May 31, 2007 6:16pm CST
not a three word thing but a 1 line thing, as long as you want the line to be, so lets see how good of a short story we can make He was drinking a can of arizona ice tea, thinking of where he would rather be.
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spiderman05
@spiderman05 (851)
• Canada
1 Jun 07
At that time, the man at the corner made some steps towards him, paused for a few ever-lasting seconds, then said "Do you remember Tony? Tony Rosetto"
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mortfinkle
@mortfinkle (497)
• United States
1 Jun 07
That feeling of impending doom swept over him like it had so many times before. Not unlike the uneasy feeling before a firefight in Baghdad.
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spiderman05
@spiderman05 (851)
• Canada
1 Jun 07
A strange man who was standing 2 blocks way and who kept staring at him took him out from his reverie. Who is this man? He never saw him in the neighborhood before? why is he staring at him so? What does he really want from him? could he be a guy that was sent by last night thugs?
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jakester519
@jakester519 (355)
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7 Jun 07
He said to remember the pact you made that day he pulled you from the Hummvee, he said to remind you of the promise you made to him about his daughter.
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RESGuy
@RESGuy (859)
• United States
3 Jun 07
But he must not show his emotions to the strange man. He tried to hold his expressions and said,"Well what does the message say?"
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