will someone tell me what they think of this poem?

June 9, 2007 6:37am CST
I stare into the pool Clear and full of water And I dream of a world Were everyone is a pure As the water in front of me I think of the world And the pool clouds over But as I think of the love I feel Deep in my soul The pool clears And I am soaring high in the sky I am happy Happy in the sky Forever painted In with the clouds As I soar I feel the life in me And the hope I feel And I know who I am And why I am here ya i know its a little well .... you know but whatever
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@vampoet (825)
• Singapore
9 Jun 07
haha...your poem, if I am not wrong, is refering to a perfect world, or the way you would want the world to be, but then, the goings-on of the world tends to cloud your illusion? I don't know, I guess a lot of us feel the same, as in, we know the world ain't perfect but we tend to be blissful in our ignorance as it can become overwhelming...