will someone tell me what they think of this poem?
By go4amitshah
@go4amitshah (1005)
India
June 9, 2007 6:37am CST
I stare
into the pool
Clear and full of water
And I dream of a world
Were everyone is a pure
As the water in front of me
I think of the world
And the pool clouds over
But as I think of the love I feel
Deep in my soul
The pool clears
And I am soaring high in the sky
I am happy
Happy in the sky
Forever painted
In with the clouds
As I soar
I feel the life in me
And the hope I feel
And I know who I am
And why I am here
ya i know its a little well .... you know but whatever
1 response
@vampoet (825)
• Singapore
9 Jun 07
haha...your poem, if I am not wrong, is refering to a perfect world, or the way you would want the world to be, but then, the goings-on of the world tends to cloud your illusion? I don't know, I guess a lot of us feel the same, as in, we know the world ain't perfect but we tend to be blissful in our ignorance as it can become overwhelming...
