Will you tell about my poem that how you feel it? Can i Love you?

June 12, 2007 12:43am CST
A village girl Sits Lonely Looking to Far And Thinking of How to Find Food A river Moving slowly Besides Her House On blue sky A bird Flying smoothly An old man came In that silence and asked her Can i love You?
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@lkbooi (16101)
• Malaysia
17 Nov 07
In a lovely sunny day, a bird is flying freely in the blue sky. A village girl is sitting and thinking by the side of a sluggish river beside her house. This tranquil and lovely atmosphere could really inspire a person to write a beautiful poetry. ‘Can I love you?’ broke the silence suddenly. Anyhow the caring old man could really warm the heart of the lonely hungry village girl.