Advice and some feedback

United States
July 25, 2007 4:27pm CST
Well, I don't normally ask this much but I seem to wonder what everyone thinks of my material I've written. What I was wondering however was tips on what could I do to improve my article writing in the 1st place. I strive to improve by any means and hopefully get higher upfront payment offers. I'm not complaining about the offers but I think if I can get better, I could get an even better offer. http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/83194/bruce_bostwick.html That's mine right there. If you want to subscribe, that's cool and I'll subscribe to yours. Anyhow, from anyone who's done some writing. I was wondering what you all think of my stuff and if you got suggestions on how I could improve, I would like to hear them. You don't have to worry about hurting my feelings. I can take it. I just want to improve overall and see if I can get more views that way. Thanks for your time.
2 responses
@noah2413 (405)
• United States
3 Aug 07
I like your articles! The ways to get paid more are make them keyword dense, learn to do that here: http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/251830/what_is_keyword_density.html Also write about hot topics, like current events, and try to find rare info so that AC sees you as a valuable CP. here's me! http://www.asssociatedcontent.com/theinformer.html
• United States
12 Aug 07
Thanks. I will try that and see if I can do better that way. I will subscribe to you so that I can keep looking at what you have constantly. I'll see what I can find current wise and hope for the best that it's something rare and unique.
@KrauseHome (33387)
• United States
30 Jul 07
I just went in and checked out some of them, and will be posting comments on some of them too. So just look for me under http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/31500/tina_krause.html and try to do the same for me as I have done for you if you wish. Thanks!!
• United States
1 Aug 07
Sounds good. I'll have to see which articles you comment on. I will try to do with you and also I put you down as a subscriber that way I can check out your latest writing or something.