Would you tell me...?

@sreevasu (2717)
India
August 10, 2007 1:10pm CST
I never had been a poet before we met It is you, you just taught me how to write I was not a dreamer of anything that is sweet You are the one who entered my dreams first. I was hungry and you fed me what I want I was thirsty till you showed me an ocean to end my haunt You touched me, beatfied me and shaped me Made me bloom, made me complete in me Would you let me in your dreams Would you know me as I know you? Would you love me as I love you? Would you tell me you love me?
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
2 Apr 08
Great, profound thoughts here, Sreeasu. Loved it. Do not know how I missed it!! How are you doing? I keep missing you. Take care friend.
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
7 Apr 08
Oh how we missed it!! Pls take care and continue to write, pls do not stop writing, you are such a talent!! Where did you go, to Lake market, Dalhousie...did you relive those old memories!!
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
8 Apr 08
Well.. I will take care of next time I wandered around kalighat.. opted metro rail to esplanade and from there walked to Delhousie... went to my old office behind writers bldg... It was sad.... and I felt Kolkatta changed only very little in 25 yrs... the most noticeable new things are boards/hoardings of mobile companies.. Next time (hopefully, not too far) I will catch you for sure.
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
3 Apr 08
Thank you Mimpi.. I too miss you a lot.. btw, I was in your city on the 'Holi' day. I'm sorry.. I couldn't inform you in advance... Hope we could meet some other time... Take care babe..
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• China
19 Mar 08
the poesy is very beautiful,it nearly make me cry. and your profile is very good,it's chinese
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
2 Apr 08
Thank you Vivian Yeah the pic in my profile is the Chinese word for Love (you know it better), I am not a Chinese though :-)
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• Algeria
11 Aug 07
These lines made me really cry thinking of me. Thanks
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
11 Aug 07
Thank you Emilie.
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