Do you LIke Poetry?
August 22, 2007 9:25pm CST
I have a poetry blog that I would like for people to visit and give me feedback on. I wrote all the poems myself and it has been a while since I have added a poem, but I am working on it. I have two that are WIP(work in progress) and hope to get them posted soon. I write my poetry based on real life personal experiences. I have one called "The Weeping Widow" which is dedicated to my late husband. Anyone who has read any of my posts probably knows about his dramatic death. I also have an ex-boyfriend I wrote poems for and so far, one for my two daughters. Thanks for any feedback. just remember I am an amateur, not a pro. The site is http://heart-a-chokes.blogspot.com
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23 Aug 07
Hi there.. I have read your poems. I really really love poetry. and in fact, I even make poems myself. After reading your poems, there goes my heart again.. aching. :( huhuhu. I am really affected with just reading poems, especially when it is as good as yours. I have been having difficulties in coping up with my emotions. I don't know why but I'm really struggling. I am in a 4 year relationship but I still can't help the fact that I have feelings for my first love.. which is not my boyfriend. My first love was my best friend, ex best friend. When he knew how I feel, our friendship fell apart. It was very hard for me, The fact that I love him, the fact that he can't love me. :( But then again, i'm still here.. loving.. I feel guilty at times since I am in a serious relationship yet i'm thinking of my past. But thanks for sharing your poems. I really love it. Best of luck to you! I hope you finish your other poems and I hope you make new ones too. Take care
23 Aug 07
From Ocean to Ocean.... They are two people drawn together by an unseen power. A bond from a distance, only they know the reason. Love has an intensity as still as a calm night or as savage as a raging storm. That is the need. Together they are one, alone no more. A light comes into their hearts to make them alive. Aware of life and living again in a complacent world. Strangers for a time, until their souls reach out and touch one another. The knowledge of a lifetime is passed between them. Sharing the joys, the tribulations, the expectations is a new experience. Strangers no more, caring begins. With familiarity comes laughter to brighten the spirit and lighten the heart. An understanding, that words cannot express, spreads across the miles and friendship commences. They wonder at this new found level of love. They revel at the very thought of hands caressing and lips touching from ocean to ocean. The beauty of love is seen as an oasis in the desert of loneliness. They know where to look and what to say. They understand the workings of the mind to protect from pain. It is all so new and yet so easy. Heaven on earth can be love. It can be friendship. It can be understanding and compassion. Most of all it is giving. They gave of each other for each other's happiness. And together they found everything.