what is behind your heart
January 9, 2008 12:47am CST
life is not all roses,everyone will try everything under the sun. I am optimism,my friend all say im strong,brave,boldness, but i dont think so, that is the surface of my heart . that is the side of my character. To be honest, i hind my sadness behind my heart.i dont wannar everyone see my flabbiness,disability. i do the best in the face of other people . i will go ahead .leave the sadness in a concealed place .
• United States
10 Jan 08
Good prose on accepting a powerful emotion such as love and understanding where it manifests is a good subject you covered, creatively; however, you have some typographical (misspelled words) errors I would like to address. "hind" should be hide my sadness "i dont wannar everyone see my flabbiness" should be I do not want everyone to flabbiness, as my disability Otherwise, this is rewarding because it describes a positive view from a position where pain and suffering overtook the human conscious boundary sharing the light and happy new year, Miss Erica Hidvegi, the Enlightenment_Advisor, B.A. Psych/M.A. Transpersonal Studies- Cnslng/Author, Artist, Photographer, Entrepreneur & Freelance extraordinaire http://www.authorhouse.com/BookStore/ItemDetail~bookid~16058.aspx