why can't i have you? a poem i made...
By spoiled311
@spoiled311 (5500)
Philippines
January 16, 2008 9:04am CST
here's something i did several years back...what do you think of it? thanks! :-)
I love you so much
That it pains me to know
I can't have you now.
We both know the reason,
But the waiting is agonizing.
Sometimes, I just wanna drown
my sorrows with work
But sometimes, it doesn't work.
All day long, I think of you
My heart pines for you.
My love, when will this waiting end.
My heart is getting crushed.
My future dangles before me
like a faint wisp of spider web.
My love, how I yearn for you.
Each passing day, there's no
missing, that I think of the day
when we can be finally wed
and live together in married bliss.
1 response
@girlgonefishing (2174)
• United States
16 Jan 08
That's a really good poem! You should publish it on Associated Content. You can't get up front payments for poems but, you get paid for page views. I have a poem on Associated content and it's made more money than the articles I have written.
