Please,help

@Skills (89)
Croatia (Hrvatska)
March 12, 2008 3:32am CST
Hi,everybody!I didn't know in which category to put this... I have a homework to do for my English class and I really need your help.I have to write a letter back home (I have to pretend that I'm away) and if you could read it and check is everything written fine (especially the tense).So,this is my letter: Dear John, I'm away from home for almost a month now.Sorry I haven't write sooner,but I just didn't have enough time.I've been constantly moving from town to town and this is the first time I actually stayed in one for more than two days (and I'll be here for next few weeks so you can write me if you want). I've met so many people and saw so beautiful places...It's so great here in Spain.You're coming with me next time. I've been in total of 16 different towns and in every one of them people were so kind and friendly. I'm currently situated in Barcelona,in Juan's family (you remember him from our summer holidays,wright?). His parents are leading their own business so they are at home all the time and they seem happy. We're eating all meals together and I don't remember eating this much my whole life.Juan and his sister have been showing me the town for two days and I haven't seen even half yet (it's so much bigger than Zagreb). I almost feel like home here but I really miss my bed and music (unfortunately my mp3 "died" last week).And of course,I miss you. I almost forgot to tell you that we're going to El clasico this weekend at Nou Camp (I'm so excited,I can't wait!). p.s. Write me back as soon as possible because if I get bored, I might continue my trip before than I planned
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@Alfie1970 (257)
12 Mar 08
If this is seriously for your English homework, then it needs tweeking quite alot. if you want me to correct it I will :)
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