What do ya think?

United States
March 23, 2008 9:07pm CST
What do you think of this I could think of a thousand words to say but as the pen reaches my hand all my words run away I was never trying to make anyone stay just one innocent mistake, can take everything good away Like sand in my hand disappearing from sight people and things there gone although they did fight who is to say what we are supposed to do when its us who truly make bad things come true. Opinions on the poem please, I didn't right proper grammer or anything because it was something i typed from the top of my head a while ago. Thank you
No responses