Poem - alone. Do you like it?

Spain
April 5, 2008 4:32pm CST
I have created this poem since now that I broke up with my boyfriend I fell really lonely. What do you think of it? Thank you Alone Together,alone,together, alone What does this all mean what am I, wheres my home! This emptyness is killing me ripping me apart its stealing my soul and breaking my heart! What hope is there for someone someone like me without a friend in the world with nothing but need! please lord, take away this pain ive got nothing more to loose and worse ive got nothing to gain!!!
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@ellie333 (21029)
7 Apr 08
Hi Miriam, Hope you are feeling a little better for having shared. Thank you so much for best response. Much appreciated. Can't understand why more didn't read the beauty within the words as I am sure everyone has felt like this at some stage in their lives. Healing hugs. Ellie :D
@ellie333 (21029)
5 Apr 08
Thanks for sharing at a time when you are obviously going through hurt and pain but sometimes writing it in words does help release and relieve just like tears do over time. Beautiful. Healing hugs. Ellie :D