Reality or Dream©

United States
April 5, 2008 7:32pm CST
This life is like a terrible storm. Love ripped, tattered, and torn. As if the street I walk has gone. A love, a friend, someone I long. A piece of me has fell apart. An empty hole takes up my heart. With the sound of thunder my tears hit the ground. A cleaner place I am hopefully bound. The walk I take goes on for miles. Filled with hopeless laughter and forgotten smiles. Peace seems nowhere to be found. I scream for you and make no sound. My eyes, tightly they are closed. And for a second I froze. Then, like glass shatters. And nothing else matters. I open my eyes just in time. You holding me tight in bed, I find.© My sister wrote this. Please don't steal it or say it's your own. Taking credit for other people's stuff is wrong. I posted it so people can read it. Thanks.
3 responses
@daababy (219)
• United States
17 Apr 08
I really love the poem. Your sister is a good writer.
@joespez (180)
• United States
6 Apr 08
Nice work! Thanks for sharing... :)
@Phlamingho (7831)
• Denmark
6 Apr 08
That's really beautiful. Say hi to your sister and tell her I loved it :)