Trying a new technique

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A dear friend of mine is constantly saying how good it is to have an anecdote at the start of my articles. This has never really been a strong point of mine so I have never really bothered. However as I am trying to develop new skills and expand upon my ability I decided to give it a go. Here is the link to the article where I tried to use this technique http://www.helium.com/knowledge/114741 I know it is not really an anecdote as such but do you think it is getting close? Please have a read and let me know what you think. Many thanks