english language commentary for AS level

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I'm having trouble with writting the commentary for my English Language course and my tutors are providing very little help. I want to achieve a good grade and feel that I may not do so. My writing is a leaflet based on wedding dance choreography, of which I have a vast knowlege, but this provides little help when talking about the actual text! The information given to me by my tutors is very vague and does not provide enough guidance in my opinion. Can anyone please help me?