Comment my poem- i want to be your angel

Angel - 3D angel
Malaysia
January 16, 2009 4:49pm CST
i wrote some poems, tell me how you like my poems thanks criticism are welcome:) i want to be your angel just like another human though i am invisible yet always by your side with a pair of beautiful feathery wings like the one in your fantasies I want to be the angel tall giant titanic puissant and undestroyable have my wings around you protect you all the time cyclone hurricane monsoon tunderstorm lightening tornado gust blast spears whatsoever unpenetratable imperishable immortal have you embraced protect you under my arms forever you're always safe
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• Canada
20 Jan 09
Beautiful poem. Excellent imagery!
• Australia
17 Jan 09
You write beautiful poetry. Keep it up and soon you will be able to publish your own book. I want first copy! lol.