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i love to write poerty have written a few wonder if any one could comment on this one.tell me what you think or where i might need some help. my poem tis our freedom that we cherish with our loved ones by our side not the white cross on korea where so many now abide not the powers of dictatoers or the human lives of man nor the atombomb that banished lives so freely in japan just a friendly walk together just a closer walk with god not the blood of some sweet brother while together here we trod let us reason one another must this precious blood be shed must some mothers heart be broken by the evilness instead here on earth were only human each a soul to call his own must it pay the price in crimson on some battlefeild atone how it breaks our heart dear brother tho you be not of our land how we long that god shall spare us and will finally understand may our leaders find the answer and our hearts be one accord when the mighty powers of nations join there hand accross the board.