Please Help to rewrite a song for the Children's Palace

@XoyyoX (1055)
China
April 20, 2009 8:31pm CST
CP Children's Palace is an institution to co-work with some primary and secondary schools to organize extracuricular activities. Here is a song I translate into English based on the meaning of the original Chinese song, which doesn't rhyme quite well, or there may be some improper wording, would you like improve it for us? thanks P.S. CP is a short term for a district name. Song of CP Children's Palace Green trees are around our palace, High buildings are in our palace, Students' personalities are developed in our palace, Innovation and civilization are in our palace, Songs and games are in our palace, Web-surf you can in our palace, Here is a paradise of curiosity, Here is a paradise of creativity, Here your sails set off, Here your dreams take off.
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