Paradoxal Perfection

United States
June 15, 2009 10:48pm CST
Paradoxal Perfection Stardust embers burn in her eyes Golden silken threads wave gently to the skies Satin sweet skin by touch excites Pale dawn complexion that melts the nights She boasts grace like a treasured love She personifies peace like some mystic dove She is a gentle hurricane and with her I move She is paradoxal perfection to whom I must prove
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3 responses
16 Jun 09
Many women are going to fall in love with you if you keep writing like that :)
• United States
17 Jun 09
LOL I wish!
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@jrocas05 (114)
• Philippines
6 Apr 10
well done sir. I love it.
• United States
31 Mar 10
this poetry sounds really great to me. poetry is really amazing to me. i can never get enough of it. i think that everyone should be into poetry.